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Tuesday, October 7, 2008

LOTF: Chapter 12

Chapter Title: Cry of the hunters
Perspective: Simon
Jack Merridew.......
So I guess Jack made a mistake if he didn't want to get rescued. But that was pretty clever for a guy that painted his face. The fire was went all out. It burned everything thing. I guess it made a lot of smoke too or else the boat would have never seen it. Good thing Ralph found my secret hiding place before Jack can, that savage. The next thing you know he'll be a ululation.
I guess Jack wanted to kill Ralph so badly that he went to extreme measures without thinking what would happen next like he was diddling around with him. But this is Jack Merridew we're talking about instead of a fire, he could have made a cordon waiting there until they find Ralph. When you think about it, its weird. Ralph wanted to make a fire when they knew they couldn't survive that long without adults and being rescued and Jack who LET the fire go out and made the biggest fire we ever set on the island and actually helped everyone get rescued.
I'm glad that Ralph actually made it out alive. Without going insane or dying like me. I talked to a pig head on a stick that would make me real insane, the pig was also dead too. Piggy and I also died. Both got killed by the evil in all of us especially Jack. I just no one died when we were on the island. I just wish that we were all alive, except Jack, I really don't care about Jack. Jack was the one who brought conflict into the group. Without Jack I won't be dead, Piggy won't be dead, a lot of people wont be dead. But without him they probably wouldn't have been rescued from the island. When I think about it everything that happened revolved around Jack. The death of me and Piggy. The conflict and the betrayal. Most importantly the rescue of everyone.
When they got rescued there was an officer. With many epaulettes on his uniform. There was also a piece of drill sticking out. Probably an old uniform also. I didn't hear what they were saying but Ralph and that officer talked.

1 comments:

Wade *-* said...

Good post Jp. I liked the way you put personality into your writing. i liked the style of writing you used too.













good job.