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Saturday, May 30, 2009

Journal #7 -Chapters 26-28 Perspective:Scout

I was just walking home and I pass the Radley's house. I'm old enough now, I'm not afraid anymore. Then I start thinking if Boo was just a regular person, and I have a friendly conversation. I would say "hi" like I have said it to him everyday when I pass and he would say "hello" everyday like it was a routine. O well. I know how unlikely that is to actually happen.

Then at school Mrs.Gates talks about Hitler's persecution and says how wrong it is for Hitler to kill those Jews. Then she is at the courthouse saying that its about time someone taught the blacks a lesson. She is a huge hypocrite. How can she do that when, in class, she says how we are a "Democracy" and how Germany is a "dictatorship" So I guess her assessment is its wrong for Hitler to persecute Jews, but its right for whites to hate blacks. I don't think she can even be a teacher.

I hear Bob Ewell got a with the WPA. Then he lost it a few days later. Then he "allegedly" blames my dad because he lost his own job. Now he is breaking into Judge Taylor's house and stalking Helen Robinson. Whats up that guy? Last time I he won the case. Why is he so angry and screwing up his life?

Halloween is coming up and there is a pageant that I have to be in. I guess it was okay to be in the pageant, but now I have to dress as ham? The least that Atticus can do is show up, but he is too "tired" to go and so Aunt Alexandra. So, Jem walks me to school. It was dark, cold, and creepy. Perfect spot for a serial killer to do his killing. I was starting to think that there is a serial killer. Then there is something rustling in the bushes. Then Cecil Jacobs jumped out. Wow. I should punch him in the face for scaring me like that, but I had to get to the pageant. Now we are at the pageant and it soo boring. I fell asleep and missed my time to go up on stage. So I go out anyway and everyone starts laughing. I was so embarrassed that I wanted to wait backstage in my ham costume and wait till everyone left. After a while, I consented with Jem to go because he said its going to be really dark soon. Now I have to walk through the woods at night where I can barely see through the ham costume. It was a very inconvenient moment for me. Its cold, dark, and I'm wearing a ham costume that I can barely see out of. As we were walking we hear the noise again and we thought it was Cecil Jacobs again. We heard it every time we walked, but when we stopped walking we couldn't hear it anymore. Then one time we stopped walking and we still heard it. Then Jem yelled at me to run and I knew something bad was going to happen. I start running as fast as I can, but I fell over because of my ham costume. The shadowy figure picks me up and starts to choke me. Jem saves me and pulls him away. Jem starts carrying me to the streetlight but then he gets pulled away and I hear this bone breaking crunch. Jem screams and the shadowy figure has been pulled away by another man that I have never seen before. The noise settles down and I look for Jem. I look towards the streetlight and I see a man carrying Jem home.

When we get home, Atticus calls Mr. Heck Tate telling him that someone just attacked us. Then Aunt Alexandra helped me out of my costume and told me that Jem is just unconscious. Then a doctor called Dr. Reynolds comes and inspects Jem to see what really happened. Then he told me that he just has a broken arm. Then I see the man who saved us leaning against the wall in our living room. Then Mr. Heck Tate comes and tells Atticus that Bob Ewell is dead under a tree with a kitchen knife up his side. What a night. I guess anything can happen when your dressed as ham.

Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Journal #6 Chapters 16-19 Perspective: Atticus

Today we were at the courthouse. Almost everybody was there, but Jem, Scout, and Dill. We started of the case with Mr.Gilmer, the prosecutor, asking Heck Tate some questions. He said that Bob Ewell asked him to go to his house and told him that his daughter, Mayella, had been raped. He said he found Mayella beaten up and she said that Tom Robinson raped her. I looked at Mayella and it looks like no one called the doctor to help out injuries. I also saw that most of her bruises were only on the right side of her face.

The next person called to the stand is Bob Ewell. Now I'm starting to think I won't win this case because almost everyone in Maycomb is prejudice against black people. I started by asking him some questions that were irrelevant according to Mr. Gilmer. While Bob Ewell is answering his questions he explains that he was just coming out of the woods when he heard his daughter screaming. He saw through the window and saw Tom Robinson raping Mayella. Tom is in a real predicament now. Right after he saw his daughter he ran for the sheriff to tell him everything that just happened. I ask him why he didn't call the doctor and he says that it was too expensive and he didn't really need it. I ask him to write his name and the jury sees that he is left handed and that a left handed man would leave bruises on the right side of the face.

Then the next person to be called is Mayella. She explains that she called Tom Robinson to go inside the fence to chop chiffarobe for her and that she would pay him a nickel. She says that she got inside and when she turned around Tom Robinson is behind her, grabbed her by the neck, and took advantage of her. She says that she needed help around the house because all her other brothers and sisters and her drunk father who don't help. I can tell that she has no friends and I understand how lonely she is. I ask her why she didn't even bruise Tom Robinson. Not even a scratch on Tom Robinson and that why her screaming wasn't heard by her siblings. I was starting to wonder how Tom Robinson could have even committed the crime now, because his left hand was torn off by a cotton gin when he was a little boy. I am starting to think that Bob beat her up and he was just pinning the crime on some innocent black man. I almost believed her because her stealthy lies are being backed up with her crying. She starts yelling and telling us we are all cowards if Tom Robinson doesn't go to jail and she starts to cry again. She doesn't answer any other questions after that. Then the judge called for a recces. Mr. Gilmer had no one else to call up, so I call up the one person that can help me prove Tom Robinson is innocent, Tom Robinson.

While Tom is answering my questions he explains that Mayella did call her to chop some chiffarobe and that she would give him a nickel. He says that he always pass the Ewell's when he goes from home to his work. Mayella always calls him to do some chores because no one else is helping her. Tom Robinson says that he didn't get payed anymore after the 1st nickel because he knew she didn't have one and knew she needed the help. Mayella asked him to go inside the house and then Mayella started to hug him. He says that she kissed him and she said to kiss her back. I asked he did and he replied subtly with a "no sir" Then while she was hugging Tom Robinson, Bob Ewell says that shes going to kill that whore, as in Mayella. Tom said that he didn't hear anything else because he was running so fast. Then Link Deas, who employs Tom, stands up and says that Tom Robinson has been working for him for eight years and that he never had any trouble with him. Judge Taylor is furious and bans Deas from the courtroom. Then Mr. Gilmer stands up and says that Tom Robinson has been arrested before for disorderly conduct. He asks why he has been helping Mayella and he admits that he felt sorry for Mayella.

Sunday, May 17, 2009

Journal #5 -Chapters 13-15 Perspective: Dill

I just can't beleive I did this. I finally ran away from home. I don't even know what to do next. I've been thinking of running away for months now, running away to Maycomb so I can see Scout again. My mom hasn't even been paying attention to me ever since she got married. And my new dad, don't get me started. He started off being all nice then he just ignores me. I don't care what he thinks about me.
I finally arrived at Maycomb and everything seems all right now. I like being here at Maycomb because all I think when I'm in school are the summers I get to spend with Jem and Scout. Now I can spend alot more time with them. I think the worst part of the whole running away thing was hiding from the grown ups. Because if they find you, they're just gonna call your parents and tell them to pick you up. So I hid. I hid under Scout's bed. When the Finch's were out for dinner I just snuck in and hid under Scout's bed. Then Scout saw me and my heart was just beating and then stopped for maybe half a second. When I heard the footsteps I thought it was Atticus, and I was scared for my life. The footsteps were heading towards me and I almost wet myself. When I saw it was Scout it was just a huge releif. Like a huge truck going at you and then just stops 1 inch away from you. But then Jem saw me. He went off and I thought he was going to tell Atticus. But I didn't know he would tell him right away. Suprisingly Atticus didn't send me home. But instead of sending me home he fed me and I slept in Jem's bed. Then he sent me Atticus sent me home the next morning.

Thursday, May 14, 2009

Journal #4 -Chapters 10-12 Perspective: Atticus



While I was reading the newspaper Jem and Scout entered the room out of nowhere,like they were inaudible, and asked me "why are you so old" And I told them that I just started late. I guess they were ashamed of me because I notice that all the other dads are younger and have interesting jobs.

There was a mad dog in town and everyone was in peril. He was walking very slowly up to us. There were only two people who could have saved us. There was Mr. Heck Tate and the other was me. Tate's aiming is rusty and I haven't shot a gun in thirty years and my left eye is bad. I told Tate that he had a perfect shot right now but he said "You know my aim isn't that good anymore" and that only I can stop him. The dog was coming closer and I had to act fast. I took the rifle and started to walk up to the dog. I noticed from the center of my eye that Jem and Scout tried to get out of the house inconspicuously so that they can see better but I told them to stay where they are. I held out my rifle and killed Tim with one shot. Now that I shot him we just had to wait for Zeebo to come and clean up the mess. Then I overheard Miss Maudie coming to Jem and Scout and asked them if they are still ashamed of me. Miss Maudie said that back in the day, when I was a little boy, they used to call me Ol' One-Shot. Jem asked why I didn't tell them that I was good with guns. Then I asked myself why I didn't tell them that I was good with guns and aiming. Then I over heard Miss Maudie say "Maybe he thinks that God gave him an unfair advantage to most living things. I know that Atticus in his heart he is civilized. That's why he didn't fire a gun until he needed to. And I guess that he needed to now" Overhearing what she said just answered my question perfectly.


Then the next day I'm walking back home about to pass Mrs. Dubose's house and her camellias are destroyed and they're everywhere on the floor. I see a broken baton on the ground and Mrs. Dubose says that it was Jem. I was so upset that I forgot everything else she said. I picked up the broken baton and walked back home. When I got back, I slammed the door shut and yelled "Jem!" I asked him if he did it and he honestly replies with "Yes sir" He didn't even try to contradict me. Then I told him to go back to Mrs. Dubose's house and apologize. When he came back he said he has to read to her for 2 hours every weekday and Saturdays and for one whole month. And So he did.
After Jem was done reading to her for a whole month now and I get a call telling me to write Mrs. Dubose's will. When I get back with the candy box Jem asked me what Mrs. Dubose wanted. I told him that she died and that she was a morphine addict. That she was addicted almost all her life. She used it for a painkiller but she knew she was going to die. So she stopped taking morphine and died proudly. I told them that she was the bravest person I knew. She could have taken the morphine and lived without the pains but instead she decided not to and die proudly. To me I thought her decision was cantankerous. I would have done the same.

Sunday, May 10, 2009

Journal #2 - Chapters 4-7 - Perspective: Jem


Today I was just walking from school and I see Scout chewing gum. She tells me that she just “found it” and that there were two pieces. She just had this face on and I can tell she was hiding something. Something so big not even a chameleon can hide it. Now I'm standing just thinking, Where was my piece of gum? Then I started thinking if she just found it, then she didn't know where it was or has been. For all she knew it could have been in someones outhouse. I told her to spit it out immediately.
Then school is over and summer is starting. Then Dill arrived to Maycomb again. I was really happy, now I won't be bored for the whole summer. So now Dill, Scout, and I started to play some games. Scout wanted to roll in some big old tires. Yawn. I thought that was a malignant idea. I didn't want to cause I was too big for that kind of stuff. Then she said she wanted to go first, Now I'm annoyed cause she interrupted me. Now it was unanimous for me that I should give that tire one my my strongest push I ever gave. I wanted her to go roll down to the street, but she ran into the Radley House instead. I saw her, but she wasn't moving. She was just wondering where the heck she was. I yelled that she has to get away from there. She got up and ran back. I asked why she didn't bring the tire ands he told me to go get it. I got mad so I ran and got the tire back.
Then Calpurnia came out and yelled “Lemonade Time!” So all of us went back to the house for a drink if lemonade. I had a great idea for a new game that we should play. Scout didn't want to play, It looked like she wanted to evade this game, so automatically in my head I think “wimp”, but then out in the blue she wanted to play. I was thinking she only did this so she wouldn't look like a wimp. We started to play this game almost every day now. Once we were playing this scene and I needed to go get some scissors. I got them from Calpurnia's sewing machine drawer. We started to play again, then Atticus caught us playing. I was trying to keep that on the down low and hoped Dill and Scout knew that I was trying to do that.
I was starting to get bored of Scout cause she got boring. She doesn't want to do anything anymore. She just hangs out in the tree house wondering what Boo Radley is doing and the rumors about him. I felt sad and sorry for her because she's all alone and bored by herself instead of being bored with us. It is kind of her fault cause she doesn't wanna do anything anymore. Then Dill and I had an idea. We were thinking that we give a note to Boo Radley and hope that he answers it. Since Scout had nothing better to do we asked her to be the lookout while we were putting the note onto the Radley Place. I was thinking of putting it on a pole and then have it go onto the house, but then the note was stuck. Then Atticus caught us and said that we should stop tormenting Boo Radley. Ha. Sure.

One Night Scout, Dill and I went to the Radley Place. When we got there we got Dill to look up into the window. He couldn't see a lot because of the curtains. I got onto the porch there was this shadowy figure, a man with a hat on. It walked passed us a couple times. After that we just booked. We all ran outta there, and we all heard the sound of a shotgun being fired from behind us. And as always nothing can just go regularly. As we were running Scout fell. We ran back to the fence, I tried to get under it but my pants got caught. I had to forget about my pants and just wiggle out. We were running and I was just halfway till I'm in my birthday suit. We walked home so we wouldn't seem suspicious then Atticus was there and asked me where my pants were. I was just thankful because I got the prince of running right here. Dill said that he won my pants in a game of strip poker. What a day.

Sunday, May 3, 2009

Journal #1- Chapters 1-3 from the perspective of Ms. Caroline

Well my first day being a teacher here at Maycomb. These kids here are at least 3 years older than any regular first graders. But I still taught them like first graders, so I started by writing the alphabet on the blackboard and asked if any one even knew what it was. I was a little surprised that they knew and a little not surprised because they have been in the first grade for a couple years now. I asked my student, Jean Louise, to read it to us. I was very surprised that she knew the alphabet and knew how to read the alphabet. Then I started to think that there is no way she is this smart. I told her to tell her father to stop teaching her because that will interfere with my teaching. When I told her that she seemed shocked because she acted like he didn't teach here any anything and that I'm suppose to believe that she learned how to read all by herself? When it was time for lunch almost everyone had one, but Walter Cunningham. I felt sorry for him so I decided to make a compromise with him. He lend him the quarter and he can pay me back on the next day. But he declined my offer. Now I'm just angry because this kid ain't taking my quarter I'm offering him and Jean Louise for knowing how to read already. Things are just getting worse and worse for me. Walter whispered something to Scout and she tells me that he's a Cunningham. How am I suppose to know what that means? Then she is babbling about the Cunningham's and that they don't take anything they can't payback. That they only payback with stove wood and other things. This girl really irks me. After that, I thought that the Cunningham's were eccentric because they should at least accept things that are offered to them that are free, so they don't have to repay them with money or stove wood.


Then after lunch, I thought was going to be better, but wasn't. First there was this thing in one of my students head. I yelled it was alive and somehow not surprising all the guys in the class rush over and try to kill it. I was pointing at this students head because something was moving in there. Then a student called “Little Chuck Little” said I shouldn't be afraid of any “cootie” whatever that is. I watched how the “cooties” worked and it was oddly fascinating and horrifying. I asked for his name and he replied with a Burris Ewell. I searched the roll book but there was no first name for the Ewell that was on my roll book. Then I made a pronouncement for Burris Ewell to go home and wash his hair with lye soap and kerosene because I do not want any “cooties” on my head. When he stood up he was very filthy. His filth and “cooties” were intimidating me because he smells bad, and I don't want “cooties” on me. I asked him to take a bath before he comes back to school. Then he says that I ain't sending him home because he was about to leave anyway. That he already spent enough time for this year. Then one of my students explained that he is an Ewell. That they come on the first day and they leave for the whole year. That I have to mark them absent the rest of the year. I was concerned because these kids aren't getting a good education and that their parents must be horrible for letting there students act like that. I told Burris to sit back down. Then “Little Chuck Little” told me to let him go because he's liable to start a fight. I told him to go home and if he doesn't I'll report this to the principal. He turns around with this look and says that if I do report him that I'd be damned. That no slut of a school teacher can ever make him do nothing. I tried not to cry, but he was just waiting there. Waiting for me to cry. I couldn't hold so I just cried and the students cheered me up.

Sunday, March 29, 2009

Immigration Project Reflection


JP Aquino
Immigration Project Reflection

In this whole immigration project we had to do three things. We had to read a book about immigration and post what we think on our blogs. Then we respond to our group members blog and say what we think about the quote they chose. The second thing we have to do is was to paint an art piece that relates to our book. The last thing we have to do is interview an immigrant. I think this was a long project because we did a lot of things that helped us learn more about immigrants and immigration.

It was very hard because it's hard to tell when the book is a past or present, because Valentino is always telling stories about him when he was in Africa. It's hard because it doesn't say when its about to be a story about the past when it transitions from present to the past. I wasn't really happy about my choice, because my book was gigantic and everyone else's was smaller than ours. I was really upset that I had to read 90 pages per meeting. I could have lessened our pages that we have to read by increasing the pages we had to read by the first meeting because we had a day off before we get back to school, so we had more to read and the rest of the pages would be less. But my group members didn't listen so we ended up reading 90 pages per meeting and I wasn't happy about that. It was okay having to read the book though. It was a very good book about someone's life. I liked how detailed the story was so I can see what the author is thinking in his head when he is writing the book. I also saw how difficult it was for Valentino in Africa and Atlanta.

I learned how hard it was to survive in Africa when your village is being raided by murahaleens and when you are in the night in the forest with hungry lions. I also learned how differently my literature group interpreted the way Dave Eggers wrote the book. I saw how my group saw a lot about the book in a small quote. I couldn't think of anything for the question when one of my group members chose a small quote because I didn't interpret the quote they way they interpreted the quote. I think that this book had a lot of things happening in it. There is no part in this book where there is something boring happening. There is always something interesting happening in this book.

I think that the current literature process is good as is. But the only thing I would add is predictions. I think we should add predictions to our posts, so then when we comment we can either agree or disagree about our group members prediction and we would give an explanation to why we think that way. I think that adding predictions will really improve this activity and will start more conversations about who's predictions are right and wrong.

I think that blogging for our literature circle book is a good idea. Compared to talking face to face with our literature circle book, blogging is a lot easier. I think it is easier because if you talk face to face with your group you would have less time to think and answer someone's question because someone people need more time to think than other people and we don't get pressured on answering the quote or question faster because if you talk face to face with your group you are using class time, so you are limited with time to answer.

Sometimes I would have trouble commenting because my group members didn't post yet, or they could have mistyped something and I wouldn't know that they are asking or saying. I learned that they interpreted the book differently than I did. I also learned a lot about the book while reading my groups posts, because I could have misread something in the book while reading and that made me think differently about the story.

The second thing that we have to do for this project is make an art piece that relates to our book. What I chose to do is to recreate the book cover because the current book cover is plain. That it doesn't really explain much. We had to do make two different book covers and then choose one of them for our final piece. My first idea was to make a cover based on what happened and what is in the book. To show what he has experienced and thought about during the book. My second idea was just two continents, America and Africa, with an arrow in between so at least people would think that this book is about someone going from Africa to America. In the end I chose to do my first idea because my peers thought it looked good.

I think that there isn't an easy connection made between my art piece and the book I read because I think that you would get what is going on in my art piece after you have read the book. In the end I thought that I should have done the second idea instead because two continents and an arrow in between easily makes people think about immigration from Africa to America.
I think that it turned better than what I thought it would turn out. I'm not really good at painting so I thought my art piece would have ended up a mess. There were also a lot of detailed images I included in my piece, so I had to be very careful.

A lot of things would have enhanced the quality for my final piece. One thing is that I should have painted with a smaller brush for the more detailed images so I can make the image look better. I also think that if I out lined my images before painting the insides would have helped a lot because then I could see where I'm not suppose to paint with the out line.

I learned that you shouldn't make your art piece about whats in the book because most of the people going to look at it will know because they didn't read the book yet. You should have made an image about what the whole book was about and not what is in it.

The last thing we have to do for this project it to interview an immigrant. My interview process was very smooth because my immigrant answered the questions I asked very thoughtfully so I had a lot of info about her. If she gave me one word or one sentence answers it would be very difficult to understand how hard or easy it was for them to adapt to a new country.

I didn't really understand why we had to do a total of three interviews until Mrs. G told us. But, I thought it was going to be hard, because I worried if I would have ran out of questions to ask. I thought that emailing was the easiest because when they reply you won't have to write their answers down unlike using the phone or a face to face interview. For email if you forget one of their answers you can just look at the email they sent to you.

I learned that Canada is not that different from the United States because she really made it clear that Canada is very similar to the United States besides all the states and the different flags. In the first two interviews that I did by email I mostly learned about Canada's culture. I learned the different foods, languages, and religions. In the last interview I learned more about my interviewee's personal life, hobbies, likes, and dislikes. All the interviews helped me understand about immigration and more reasons for immigration other than disliking your home country.
I learned that there are many reasons for immigrating. I learned that most of people's reasons for immigrating is because they do not like their home country. I learned that there are more reasons for immigrating. Some just want to go to another country and experience what the new country has to offer. I learned that immigrating in this present time is easier than immigrating back then during the huge immigration waves because back then you either had to go through Angel Island or Ellis Island. The waiting time from getting from one country to another was longer back then than it is now, because it would take months to get there. Now it will just take a couple hours to go from one country to another.

Wednesday, March 11, 2009

What is the What #6

Quote #1:
"Hello friends,
I am writing to inform you that I have been recently assaulted by two dangerous persons in my apartment. The attackers asked me to let them use my phone and when I opened the door, they held me at gunpoint, kicked me in the cheek, forehead, and back, until I lost consciousness. They took my cell phone, digital camera, checkbooks, and over five hundred dollars in cash. Thank God they didn't shoot me. For some time, I was guarded by a boy who I believe to be their son, Michael.
As I write yo you, I do not have a cell phone and do not have your contact information. Please send me your numbers and I will call you tomorrow. I need to get all my information back.
Have a blessed day.
Sincerely,
Valentino Achak
P.S Please remind me of your birthday" Valentino pg 505 third paragraph

This is Valentino sending an email to his friends email addresses that he still remembers. Since he got robbed he doesn't have his friends contact information and can't call or email them. But Valentino is emailing the ones that he remembered and asked them to tell Valentino his friends email addresses and phone numbers that he remembers. I was really surprised on how good his grammar and spelling is. I knew he wasn't dumb, but I didn't know he was that smart to write that well with no grammar and spelling errors.

I think that this quote relates to the fifth question, What hardships do the characters endure as they make a new life. I think it relates because he was assaulted and robbed by two people. He was deceived by them because Tonya, the lady who was at the front door at the beginning, said that her car broke down and she had to use Valentino's phone. Then Powder comes in, the big guy who helps Tonya with the robbery, and tells him to sit down while Tonya gets all the things. Then Valentino gets Powder angry and Powder hits him and beats him until he is unconscious. This is a very difficult situation and I think that this is one of the hardships Valentino faces as he makes a new life.

I can connect to this because he is typing this letter because he got robbed, only because he was deceived by a lie. I have been lied to alot before. Sometimes when I was young my parents would tell me to finish my food or brush my teeth or take a shower, and then they said they would take me somewhere. Of course since I was small I wanted to go everywhere. So I did that they said and they tell me we will go later. We didn't go most of the times but sometimes we went.

Have you ever been deceived before? If so, how did you feel?

Quote #2:
"Whatever I do, however I find a way to live, I will tell these stories. I have spoken to every person I have encountered these last difficult days, and every person who has entered this club during these awful morning hours, because to do anything else would be something less than human. It gives me strength, almost unbelievable strength, to know that you are there. I covet your eyes, your ears, the collapsible space between us. How blessed are we to have each other? I am alive and you are alive so we must fill the air with our words. I will fill today, tomorrow, everyday until I am taken back to God. I will tell stories to people who will listen and to people who don't want to listen. to people who seek me out and to those who run. All the while I will know that you are there. How can I pretend that you do not exist? It would be almost as impossible as you pretending that I do not exist" Valentino pg 535 last paragraph.

This is Valentino talking about what he will do in his life. In this page he plans on leaving the apartment. He wants to leave the U.S and go back to his huge family back at Marial Bai. He wanted to go back home but not until he finishes college education. He saw himself stepping of a plane with a suit, a suitcase and his diploma inside the suitcase and back to Marial Bai.

This relates to the second question, what was their journey like coming to America. I think it relates because Valentino's journey to America is the story that he tells. How he survived the lion attacks and the murahaleen. How he survived and waited to be interviewed so he can go to America. How he got robbed and assaulted to make his life even harder. I think that Valentino's life is very sad and happy at times. But I think its sad most of the time. He has lost Tabitha, the girl he likes, William K., his friend, and he has gotten beaten and robbed.

Have you ever been so determined to do something that you will do what it says in the quote? If so, what is it?

Thursday, March 5, 2009

What is the What #5

Quote #1

"The scenery was astonishing, the peaks and valleys, the mist and the sun. We passed through the Kapenguria of Kenya, much of it mountainous and cool with rain. We saw birds with bright plumage, we saw hyenas and gazelles, elephants and zebras. And corn! So many crops, everything growing. We pressed our faces to the glass and wondered, Why couldn't they put Kakuma there? Or there, or there?" Valentino Pg. 454 paragraph 2



This is Valentino in Africa in a bus. He is riding with 21 other Sudanese and Somalis. While the group was in a bus they drove through what the quote explained. They saw many different animals. I was surprised how interested they all were then they saw the corn and asked themselves why couldn't Kakuma be there?


This quote relates to the first question because when Valentino and the other twenty people were in the bus passing the animals and corn they were so amazed and interested how there were so many animals and that crops were actually growing. This relates to the first question because in Africa they barely have any food growing because of how interested they were. I think Valentino came to America because he doesn't want to live of scraps and that everyday he works to just survive because there are barely any food. I think he came to the U.S because he just wants to get away from all the bad things in Africa.

I can relate to this because I went to Vegas during summer break. There were so many things there that I never see in San Diego. It was late at night and I felt wide awake. I don't know why because if I was in my house at that time I would be sleepy. I think that's just what Vegas does to you. I was in the car and I saw the huge black pyramid and the light shining from the top of it. I was amazed of how big the pyramid was and interested of what is in it.



Question #1
When you were traveling have you ever been so amazed and interested because you have never seen anything like it before?


Quote #2
"Here the students walked freely and wore clean white shirts with plaid skirts and scarves to match. I was too much. I wanted to wear a uniform, too. I wanted to be one of them, to know what to wear everyday, and to be Kenyan, to go to school along paved roads and laugh about nothing. To buy some candy on the way home and eat it and laugh! That was that I wanted."
Valentino pg 457 bottom paragraph to pg 458 top paragraph

This is Valentino alone in his sponsors apartment. He was so amazed about the lifestyle there. He compared the lifestyle in Nairobi to Sudan and there were many differences. He was so amazed that he spent an hour watching the streets from the second story window. Then he watched TV for three hours and watched a learning channel at some point. He was amazed that the book they were talking about in the channel was the same book they had in the refugee camp. He was filled with pride because what was good enough for the refugees was good enough for the Kenyas of Nairobi.

This quote relates to the first question because in the quote it explains what Valentino wanted. He wanted to be just like the other kids who weren't refugees and who has an easier life then him. He wanted to be one of those kids. He wanted to have a regular life where he just goes to school and walks on the road to home with his friends laughing about random things.

Character Judgement: I think that Valentino has a very difficult life. I think that he is a very smart person because he made decisions that kept him alive the whole time. It kept him alive from the lion attacks and the murahaleens. I felt sad for Valentino when he was telling his stories because most of them were tragic. For example when he was telling a story when William K died and he didn't really tell Moses. Both of his friends died and I felt really sad for him because he just lost both of his friends and he is already in a bad situation.

Question #2
Have you ever wanted to be like someone? Sort of like how Valentino was describing how he wanted to be one of those students and have his own uniform

Sunday, March 1, 2009

What is the What #4

Quote #2:
"I ran through the village, still coughing. There was smoke everywhere. So many screams, screams from people fallen and bleeding. I jumped over two more bodies, old men in the middle of the path. The second man grabbed my ankle. He was alive. He grabbed me and told me that I should lie with him and play dead. But he was bloody everywhere. One of his eyes was burned closed and blood flowed from his mouth" Moses pg 272, paragraph 2

In this quote Moses (Valentino's friend from Africa) is lying under a tree with Valentino in Africa. Moses is telling Valentino a story of how he got the wound on his back looking like crimson red stripes. Moses says that he was running away from the murahaleen when the village was on fire. He is heading towards the school that was burning because he thought people would be in there and would tell him what to do. He is running through the village and a person on the ground grabs him by the ankle and tells him to lie down with him and play dead. I think they did that so that if the murahaleen see them they would think they're dead and leave them alone.

This quote relates to the third question, What was the life of the characters in their home country, and relates to the first question, Why have the characters in your book come to America. This quote relates to the third question because their life in Africa is very dangerous. There are dangerous and deadly things everywhere. There are fires, murahaleen, and lions that are their to end your life. This relates to the first question because they want to feel safe. They don't want to be in danger anymore with their homes getting set on fire and having to play dead so they don't die. They want to get away from all the dangerous things.

I can't really relate to this but the closest thing I have experienced to this was then I was watching the movie Chuckie. Chuckie was an evil doll who just kills people in case you don't know. I was watching and I remember Chuckie get a cop inside the van. Then he pulled a string and alot of knives flew at the cop. Then a guy walked to into the van and he didn't know the doll was alive so he opened the chest that was inside the van and it was the cop. He was so scared that he walked back and he was on the freeway then he got hit by a bus and the blood got everywhere.

Have you ever experience or seen anything that can be described by this quote?

Quote #2
"In the morning I dreamt that my head was being pressed into the sun. In my dream, the sun was smaller, the size of a large pan, and my head was being pressed against it. The heat was so strong, it seemed to be melting my hair and skull. I awoke to the smell of something burning. It smelled like flesh on fire. Then I realized that the dream was not a dream: the Arab was putting a burning metal rod to my head. He was branding me. In my ear he branded the number 8, turned on its side" Moses pg 273, paragraph 4

This is Moses still telling how he got the scars on his back. He says that he was tightly tied to a horse for days and it left marks on his back. Moses said he passed out and he was dreaming a large pan sized sun was pressed against him and it wasn't a dream. He has become a slave and that he is branded.

This quote relates to the first quote because Moses is a slave in Africa. If Moses left Africa and came to America he would be a free man again. He can start fresh with no more lions and murahaleens. This also relates to the third question because his life was really difficult. It was hard to survive because they had to walk in deserts and tall grass for weeks and maybe even months to reach a destination, and along the way there are lions that are really hungry and there is a line of boys walking. Its like a buffet to the lion. There are no more murahaleen hunting, killing, and branding them either.

I can relate to this because I have experienced this many times. I just woke up somewhere at 5:00-5:30 and I had to get up and take a shower to get to school. I just woke up and the first thing I hear is my mom telling me to get up or she would be late for work. I did what any could would do and said "5 more minutes" I thought all that was a dream and then I woke up and was more aware than the first time. My mom got angry at me for not getting up and just going back to sleep. But not really angry.

Have you ever thought you were dreaming something and it turned out that it wasn't a dream?

Wednesday, February 25, 2009

What is the What #3

Quote #1
"I ran through the night. I ran because no one had told me to stop. I ran listening to my breathing, loud like a train, and ran with my arms outstretched to protect me from trees and brush. I ran until I was seized by something. I had been running at top speed and then I was stopped, stuck like an insect in the silk of a spider. I tried to shake free but I had been punctured. Pain seared me everywhere. There were even teeth in my leg, in my arm. I lost consciousness."~Valentino pg 200 2nd paragraph

This was Valentino running away again. I have noticed that Valentino runs alot in his life before he came to the U.S. He ran and hid from the murahaleen and he is running now. This quote relates to the first question because Valentino is tired. He doesn't want to run away from things anymore just to survive. He wants to live regularly without people hunting. He wants to live with a normal job at a normal place. Knowing that he won't get chased or at least not as much as he was in Sudan. This is one of maybe many reasons that Valentino left and came to America.

I can relate to this because today at x-block Ms.Morales made all of us run a whole lap around the whole park. It was a really huge park. Even though it wasn't dark I was running as fast as i can because I just wanted to finish the lap. When I was running all I can hear is my breathing and I almost hit the branches of a tree while I was running so I had to stretch my arm out so I don't get smacked in the face by the pointy branches.

Have you ever ran so much before that all you can hear is your breath and you had to move your hands or arms in the way so you don't get hit by anything?

Quote #2
"I could not keep it straight. In seconds the bicycle tilted and the tire turned slowly and I fell like the horseman had in Marial Bai, caught under the bike. My leg struck a hard patch of dirt and roots and my wound opened up, wider than before" ~Valentino pg 207, 2nd paragraph

This quote relates to the fifth question because here Valentino is lost. He was in a group and now the group was gone. He is trying to find them and a faster way is to use a bike. Here he is trying to ride a bike but falls and his wound opens up. This is one challenge that Valentino is having to face while he makes a new life in America.

I can relate to this because I remember when I was first learning how to ride a bike. I didn't have my parents or anyone hold it while I was riding. I just had training wheels. But I learned fast and had the training wheels off in a few days or weeks. While I was learning I fell alot of times. Mostly on my hands so I can brake the fall. I had alot of scrapes on my hands after. I can relate to this quote because everyone falls at least once while they are trying to learn how to ride a bike.

Have you ever fell on the concrete while trying to learn how to ride a bike?

Friday, February 20, 2009

What is the What #2

Quote #1
"Michael, you have not seen darkness until you have seen the darkness of southern Sudan" ~Valentino Pg. 95 last paragraph
This is Valentino talking about his flashbacks in his head. This flashback was when his village was getting raided and he had to run away from the murahaleen. He was running through the darkness of southern Sudan and he couldn't see anything. This quote relates to the first question because his village was getting raided by the murahaleen and everyone who fought got killed and anyone of the murahaleen who just felt like killing something killed someone from the village. His friend Moses got killed also. I think Valentino came to America so he won't experience this kind of event again. He didn't want to see a village of people who he has known so well get taken away from him and killed in just seconds.
I can relate to this because I might not have seen anything as dark as southern Sudan because I have not seen it before and that I've seen some pretty dark things before. For example I came back to get a refill of my soda then when I went back to the theater it was really really dark and we were sitting all the way at the top. I was being careful of going up the stairs slowly and passing by people that were sitting.


Were you ever in a situation that was so dark and that you had to be really careful so you won't trip and face plant?

Quote #2
"Yes. These are Arabs who have fallen to the level of the animal. They are like the lion, with its appetite for raw meat. These are not humans. These lion-creatures love war and blood. They enslave people, which is against the laws of God. They have been transformed into animals"
~An old man that Valentino has found in the woods. Pg.99 second paragraph
This is when Valentino was running from the murahaleen and he found an old man that is willing to help him keep safe until morning. They are walking to his home and along the way the old man says this. This quote also relates to the first question because he does not want to be savagely killed. He wants to be safe, he wants to know he is safe and that he can start a new life without the violence. In order for that to happen he has traveled to America to start and finish his goals.
I can relate to this because if I haven't ate for a long time because of something like a long drive or we still had to get the food I would be like this when I'm eating it. I would fall to the level of an animal and have an appetite for meat not raw meat. I would devour the food in seconds depending on how hungry I am and how small the food is.

Has there ever been a time where you have fallen to the level of an animal?

Monday, February 16, 2009

What is the What #1

Quote #1: Now he searches for a solution. He begins to open drawers. I hear the rattle of silverware and worry that he might do something drastic. He opens five, six drawers and cabinets. Finally he emerges from the kitchen with a phone book and holds it over my head. "Young man! What are you doing?" He drops the book. It is the first time in my life that I have seen something coming toward me and have been unable to properly react. I try to turn my head but still the book lands squarely on my face. ~Pg.50, 5th paragraph.

This quote relates to the question "What challenge do the characters face upon their arrival?" This relates to the quote because Valentino is being robbed and the robbers left him in his apartment tied up and mouth taped over. This is a challenge because all the objects he owns are now gone and is now hit in the head with a phone book.

I can connect to this because I also saw something coming toward me and have been able to properly react. I was just playing outside and playing catch. He threw the ball up really high and came straight to me. I knew I should have moved but I just kept staring at it, watching it get bigger, until it impacted on the side of my face.

Have you ever seen something come straight to you and was unable to properly react?

Quote #2
As I lie here, I realize that the tape over my mouth is loosening. The saliva from my mouth and the persipitation on my face has softened the tape's grip. ~Pg. 47, 1st paragraph

This quote relates to this question "What challenges do the characters face upon their arrival?" I think that this quote relates because Valentino has been robbed and now he is tied up in his own apartment. Valentino was being watched by a little boy who just watches TV. The tape is about to loosen and now Valentino can ask for help from the little boy or scream for help for anyone to help him. In the story, whether its the present or a story that Valentino is sharing when he was still in Africa, Valentino has faced many challenges. Getting robbed, tied up, and even chased my lions.

I can connect to this because Valentino is tied up as if he is in a tough spot. He has to make smart decisions fast. I connect to this because I could be playing tag and I would get cornered by five other people. I would have to make smart decisions fast so I can get away.

Have you ever been in a situation where it seems like its impossible to get out?

Friday, February 13, 2009

Feild Trip Project Reflection

Part One: From Haven To Home

I think that the purpose of the exhibit was to teach us about immigration since we are about to do a project about immigration. The people or race this exhibit focused on was the Jews. It shows the Jews immigrating from one place to another and how hard it was for them when they first arrived. I had found many things that are interesting in this exhibit and learned many things. I learned that Jerry Seinfeld, the comedian, is Jewish. I learned that the creator of Barbie is Jewish. One last thing I learned is a baseball player name Hauk Greenbery was the first Jewish baseball player and hit 58 home runs. Close to beating Babe Ruth's home runs which was 60.

Part Two: Children of Immigrants
The photograph I have chosen is in the middle of a city. It has people from different cultures and races greeting each other. The people didn't even know each other, they just went up to each other and gave them a friendly hug. This photograph has struck me because people don't do this in real life. They just walk by each other with a blank face showing no emotion. For most people you have a friendly conversation before you give a stranger a friendly hug. This photo shows that people can be that nice to other people even if they have different beliefs or skin color.

Quote: "The greatest thin I hope for in my life is to become a successful person and to have a family and friends to support me, not to be looked at by just any color of my skin but who I am inside"


by, Samira Durakovic, Yogoslavia

I chose this because this can actually connect to everyone. This is almost every immigrants goal or desire. I agree with this because you shouldn't look down on people because of their skin color but based on their personality. To me this quote felt very strong and powerful because of the point it makes and how everyone can connect to this quote.

Friday, February 6, 2009

Immigration Reflection

JP Aquino
1/6/09
Immigration Reflection

An immigrant is a person born in a different country and immigrated to another country. One reason that someone might leave their country and immigrate to another country is because the country they are traveling to has something that their country doesn't have or isn't as good as the other country.
Our country offers better education than some other countries like Africa, that's why Invisible Children is helping them with their education. Our country offers better hospitals than others. The US has been affected with immigration because now the US has many languages like English and Spanish. The US now has many food varieties like Mexican food and Chinese food.
My connection to immigration is without it I won't be here or at least not in the US. A lot of my family members are probably immigrants. I don't know if any of my friends are immigrants but I know my uncle, my auntie, my mom, and my grandparents are immigrants.

Friday, January 16, 2009

The Series Of Unfortunate Events: The Bad Beginning





JP Aquino

1/15/09

The Series Of Unfortunate Events: The Bad Beginning

Written by: Lemony Snicket

The Series Of Unfortunate Events: The Bad Beginning was a really good book. it didn't take forever explaining every detail and just went right to the point. I liked how it was detailed but not too detailed and that when they introduced a character they explained if he or she is tall, short, long hair, or short hair. The author also explains the character's personality during the book so that I can picture what the author was picturing in his when he was writing the novel.

When I read books I usually like to read about the character's personality and more information about the character. I am one of the readers who like to predict about events that will or might happen in the novel. This book had the character's personality and what they liked. For me, I think the most detailed main character out of the four is Violet. The author had explained that she likes to invent things and when she is thinking the author wrote that the gears in her head were spinning at top speed. The other characters were great also. How the author included Count Olafs tattoo of an eye on his ankle and that when you walk it seems that the eye is following you around the room. I like how the author explained how evil and cruel Count Olaf can be and how disgusting the author made Count Olaf's house and that there are carvings of eyes everywhere. I also liked how the author explained how much Klaus likes to read and learn things. How he explained how Sunny likes to bite things and wrote that if Sunny likes you she will bite you softly, but if Sunny doesn't like you then she will try to bite you as hard as she can.

I liked the plot that the author has in the book. Right where everything is going fine the protagonist he made(Count Olaf and his accomplices) makes everything worse. But when the Baudelaire Orphans( Violet, Klaus, Sunny)try to find a way out in the situation they are in there plan is stopped by Count Olaf. When Count Olaf tried to make Violet his wife to get the Baudelaire fortune had me thinking that they can't get their way out. Then the author included this small detail and the Baudelaire orphans were saved. That was the greatest most unexpected twist I have ever read in this book.

I like this authors writing style because it is very unique. This author included many weird details that make the character's very interesting and keeps you reading. This author writes words that are not used often and that when he uses one of those words he will write a definition of the word in a parentheses next to the word. His writing style and the details he gives to his character's are what the whole story great. His unique, weird character's, writing style, and his plot is what made me really like this book.

In conclusion I think that this book was very good. I like the twists that made me keep reading, the details so I don't get lost and have to reread the paragraph, and the character's emotions so that I know what they are feeling in the novel. I would suggest this book to readers who like to read a story with good twists and conflicts. If you are one of those readers I suggest you read this novel and the whole series. If you are one of the readers who like really long books with every detail included in the book I suggest that you don't read this book. Overall I give this book a 10 out of 10 because the details were great and that there were not many unnecessary details included in this book. I also liked the many twists and conflicts that are included in this book.

Sunday, December 14, 2008

Book Review



JP Aquino
12/9/09


Fahrenheit 451 Book Review
By: Ray Bradbury
Fahrenheit 451 was really boring at the beginning. Even though the beginning pages were boring, they were very detailed. It says the characters name, his job, and describes his personality. You can really picture what the author wants you to picture and what the author is thinking of when he's writing the novel.
The thing I liked most about this book is that his characters are gives information about all of them. He could make a characters personality so detailed that when you read you can predict what will happen next, and you will guess right. He also has a lot of conflict in the book and you can see what the character is feeling when he's really depressed,happy or in need. His main character Montag has the biggest problems. In the book he has many detailed emotions. He is sad, happy, afraid, and miserable at times.
What I like most about books are the twists that keep me wanting to read, and the conflicts that add the emotions in a book. I liked this book because there are many twists and conflicts in it. These are the things that I think a book really needs or else the readers would put down the book. Without any its not a book anymore. Its just a dream where everything goes right, where everything starts to be so predictable. None of the readers would like that unless there in preschool.
The one thing makes the book is the details. The details are what make a good book that readers can picture in their mind. Too little details will leave readers confused and rereading the book so they can get what just happened or to see if they missed something. Too much details will make a book boring and leaving the readers still reading. The readers would take forever to read all the details and get bored. Then if they get bored they will just put the book down and do something else that isn't boring. Detail is great and all but too much is just too boring. This book was very boring because there could be a page describing all the details, when all you want to do is see what happens next.
Overall, in my opinion I think this is a well written book. The characters are detailed, the story is detailed, and the writing style is detailed. I would suggest to readers who want an exciting book to not read this book if you don't want to waste your time reading all the small details that the author includes. If you are really patient and like books with all theses twists and conflicts I would recommend this book to you, because you have the patience to wait for the details to be finished. I would give this book a 6 out of 10 for me because there were just too many details for me and I didn't have the patience to wait for the details to end.

Tuesday, October 7, 2008

LOTF: Chapter 12

Chapter Title: Cry of the hunters
Perspective: Simon
Jack Merridew.......
So I guess Jack made a mistake if he didn't want to get rescued. But that was pretty clever for a guy that painted his face. The fire was went all out. It burned everything thing. I guess it made a lot of smoke too or else the boat would have never seen it. Good thing Ralph found my secret hiding place before Jack can, that savage. The next thing you know he'll be a ululation.
I guess Jack wanted to kill Ralph so badly that he went to extreme measures without thinking what would happen next like he was diddling around with him. But this is Jack Merridew we're talking about instead of a fire, he could have made a cordon waiting there until they find Ralph. When you think about it, its weird. Ralph wanted to make a fire when they knew they couldn't survive that long without adults and being rescued and Jack who LET the fire go out and made the biggest fire we ever set on the island and actually helped everyone get rescued.
I'm glad that Ralph actually made it out alive. Without going insane or dying like me. I talked to a pig head on a stick that would make me real insane, the pig was also dead too. Piggy and I also died. Both got killed by the evil in all of us especially Jack. I just no one died when we were on the island. I just wish that we were all alive, except Jack, I really don't care about Jack. Jack was the one who brought conflict into the group. Without Jack I won't be dead, Piggy won't be dead, a lot of people wont be dead. But without him they probably wouldn't have been rescued from the island. When I think about it everything that happened revolved around Jack. The death of me and Piggy. The conflict and the betrayal. Most importantly the rescue of everyone.
When they got rescued there was an officer. With many epaulettes on his uniform. There was also a piece of drill sticking out. Probably an old uniform also. I didn't hear what they were saying but Ralph and that officer talked.

Sunday, October 5, 2008

LOTF: Chapter 11

Chapter Title: Castle Rock
Perspective: Jack
This island is mine
I was so delirious how that rock hit Piggy. It was so loud, so bloody, so........ awesome! Wow. I couldn't believe it myself when Piggy got hit. It was two for one because the conch broke into a million pieces. Now that the conch is gone Ralph won't have that lame excuse and say “I have the conch!” They were both annoying me. Piggy and the conch. I guess the only way Piggy survived that long was because of that talisman.
Now that Piggy's gone, Ralph will have no followers because I got SamnEric and if they're not in my side I guess they'll have to mysteriously disappear. Everything is going my way now that I stopped following Ralph. Because right when I left that day, everyone followed me except Piggy, SamnEric, and especially Ralph. Soon Ralph will join me and his leadership will come to a cessation and if he doesn't join he'll die of starvation because I'm not gonna get him meat. Also Ralph can't get his own meat. When there was that boar all he did was throw a lousy stick at it. He will never survive without me.
All Ralph use to talk about is how I'm obsessed with hunting, how my hunters and I have a truculent behavior. He asks if I ever thought of getting rescued. We'll only he wants to get rescued because he can't survive. Maybe me and my hunters don't want to get rescued, because we all can survive the wild.
I'm pretty sure that Ralph is going to join our side. When he does I'll probably show him how to hunt so we can all get more meat. Why wouldn't he join our side? We have food and we have lots of fun. We'll also be safe from the beast because we'll give it part of our kill. Ralph on the other hand isn't and he'll probably get eaten. From now on, this island is mine.

Thursday, October 2, 2008

LOTF: Chapter 10

Chapter Title: The Shell and the Glasses
Perspective: Ralph
Jack is a fool


I still can’t get over that we killed Simon yesterday. If only it wasn’t cloudy and dark, then we would have known it was Simon we were beating to death. It was like my mind was miles away because Piggy was being serious saying I should call an assembly but I laughed. I don’t really know why. Then I say that Piggy wasn’t a part of it because he was outside of the horseshoe that the kids made. Then I say I was at the outside of the horseshoe also so I wasn’t apart of the murder of Simon. Piggy says he was batty for crawling into the horseshoe any way.
Then we see SamnEric and they said they left before the “dance” But they hesitated when they answered that they got lost last night in the forest. Then we made a fire with Piggy’s specs. Jack is a barmy fool along with his hunters. He stole the glasses and all he wants to do is hunt. That’s the only thing in his head, hunt. Is he even considering of getting of this island? Leaving this island and having an actual regular life? He knows we killed Simon, I mean that they killed Simon. But he lied with his theological explanation, even to his own hunters, his own tribe, to the people that actually follow him. He says that it was the beast and that it can disguise itself as other people. That’s so stupid, I can’t believe those other boys actually believe him. I still can’t believe Simon died. This all came to me in an illumination. I just wished I was purged from this island.